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Flows For Optum Store

Optum Store

Making healthcare feel less like a system, and more like something you can actually use

Overview

Healthcare isn’t supposed to feel confusing, but most of the time, it does.

Too many steps. Too many unknowns. Too many moments where people stop and think, “Wait… what am I supposed to do here?”

That’s what we were up against when we set out to build Optum Store.

The idea was simple, but the execution wasn’t.
What if getting care felt as easy as ordering something online?

One place where you could:

  • get a prescription without a doctor’s visit

  • transfer meds without calling a pharmacy

  • book care without waiting on hold

  • and shop products that actually work with your benefits

All without needing to “figure it out” along the way.

That’s where I came in.

As the sole UX writer on the experience, I owned every word across the product. Not just writing, but shaping how the entire experience felt. My job was to remove hesitation, reduce friction, and make people feel like they knew exactly what to do, even if they’d never done it before.

Because in healthcare, clarity isn’t a nice-to-have. It’s the difference between someone moving forward… or dropping off completely.

And it worked.

In under two years, we built a $200M+ business and supported over 1 million customers, by making something complicated feel simple.


Prescription Transfer Flow for Virtual Pharmacy

Because moving your medication shouldn’t feel like paperwork

The problem

Transferring a prescription is one of those things that sounds simple… until you actually try to do it.

Call the pharmacy. Wait on hold. Dig up information you don’t have. Get stuck halfway through and give up.

We needed to remove all of that.

The approach

We designed this flow to feel familiar. More like ordering a pizza than navigating healthcare.

Step by step. No guesswork. No dead ends.

What I focused on

I wrote every moment with one goal in mind: keep people moving forward

  • Microcopy that guides, not overwhelms
    Clear, simple instructions so users always knew what to do next

  • Error messages that don’t punish users
    Instead of “something went wrong,” we told them exactly what happened and how to fix it

  • CTAs that create momentum
    “Transfer My Prescription” wasn’t just a button, it was a nudge to keep going

  • Support before confusion happens
    Small moments like “Where do I find my prescription number?” prevented drop-off before it started

  • FAQs that actually reduce friction
    Answered real questions at the exact moment users were thinking them

The impact

We didn’t just simplify a process.
We turned something people avoid into something they could actually complete.


FSA/HSA Eligibility Tool

Answering the question everyone has, before they have to ask it

The problem

Every FSA user has had this moment:

“Can I actually use my money for this… or am I about to find out the hard way?”

That hesitation kills conversion.

The approach

Instead of waiting until checkout to tell users “no,” we made eligibility clear upfront.

No surprises. No second guessing.

What I focused on

This was about confidence and trust

  • Plain language over financial jargon
    “This item qualifies” vs. forcing users to interpret policy language

  • Clarity in edge cases
    When something wasn’t eligible, we explained why, and what they could do instead

  • CTAs that keep users exploring
    “See eligible products” turned a dead end into a new path

  • Education baked into the experience
    Not everyone knows what FSA/HSA means, so we made it easy to understand without leaving the flow

  • FAQs that reduce support tickets
    Answered the questions users were already asking in their heads

The impact

We removed doubt from the purchase decision.

And when you remove doubt, people move forward.


Virtual Care Appointment Booking Flow

No calls. No waiting. Just get the care you need

The problem

Booking a doctor’s appointment still feels stuck in the past.

Phone calls. Hold music. Limited availability. Friction at every step.

The approach

We made booking feel like something you could do in seconds, not something you had to plan your day around.

What I focused on

This flow was all about reducing anxiety and building confidence

  • Step-by-step guidance that feels effortless
    No medical jargon, no confusion, just clear direction

  • Error states that keep users in the flow
    If appointments weren’t available, we didn’t stop them, we gave them options

  • CTAs that feel decisive
    “Schedule My Appointment” gives a sense of control, not hesitation

  • Expectation-setting moments
    “Here’s what you’ll need” removes uncertainty before it becomes a blocker

  • FAQs that build trust
    Helped users understand what virtual care actually looks like

The impact

We made getting care feel accessible.

Not like a system you have to navigate, but something that works for you.


The results: Numbers that speak for themselves

And the industry took notice